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PostSubject: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:46 pm

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Ever since Satune wassmall, he realised he could easly release alot chakra from any part of his body, also being able to do amazing things, like controling his chakra to come out of his fingertips to lift something. Now that hes a good ninja, he decided to ask the Mizukage about this weird attribute.
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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:21 pm

The Mizukage raised an eyebrow when his student asked the peculiar question. The Mist Kage pondered this for a whiel but shook his head and stood up.

"You will need to show me this, attribute." The Mizukage finished his sentence, letting his mouth roll into a malecious grin. He opend a window and jumped outside on it waving his hand and beaconing him to follow.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:41 pm

(You put 64 words)

Satune followed the Mizkage, jumping out of the window, and landed hard. "Ok" Satune replied, "but im not to sure how i works, so im not that good at doing it, but ill still try." He cosed his eyes and put his hands out, after a while, black cakra came out of his hands, and Satune controld it to make simple shapes. After that, Satune attempted to control hs chakra to make it pick up a small rock, the rock slipped under the rock and the chakra acted like a platform. Satune brought back the chakra, "what do you think."

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 7:48 pm

The Mizukage passed his hands threw the chakra and it slitly budged.

"This is impressive but how fast can you make it work, and how could we figure out how to make it... well... Dance flying colors around the opponent."

He half-smiled and pulled his hand out of the glossy black chakra, he scratched his index and thumb together as if to wipe something off and checked them.

"It seems this chakra acts as circulotory, as in the chakra your excpeling is returing to your body and returning out in a circular currect type thing." The Mizukage tryed his best to further analyze this.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:03 pm

(you put 101 words)

Satune was keeping out the black chakra, to let the Mizukage get a closer look at, "I havent gotten much time to examine this power closly, but so far, i know that I cant control the Chakra withough there being a wire of chakra bewten me and the major part, i think thats how it works," Satune said. Rembering the last questing the Mizukag asked, "I have no idea how fasti can move the Chakra, i havent really tested it that much." Satune looked at the scenery, waiting for the Mizukage to finish his inspecting, 'nothing out of the ordanry' he tought.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 8:17 pm

The Mizukage stopped inspecting and jumped back, maneging to snatch up a straight brach on his fly back. He landed with a silent thud and pointed the stick at Satune.

"Alright, fight me with this strange black chakra!" Th Kage shouted to him as he placed the sword behind him in a technique that shows that he's ready to swing horizentaly.

He postition his feet by sliding them along the ground.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 9:57 pm

(you wrote 69 words)

Satune lowered him self into a ready stance, putting more chakra into what was already there. The ball grew bigger, Satune made it into a giant black wall, this wall was right in front of the Mizukage. Suddely, Satune jumped back incase of an on comming attack, but at the same time, he split his wall into many spikes, headed towards the Mizukage, since Satune hadent praticted this enought, the spikes moves much slower than he intended them to.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:10 pm

The Kage grined as he saw the effort Satune put into the chakra, and how little he got in return.

"What stubborn chakra..." The kage thought as he dashed forward, then suddenly stoped infront of one of the spikes and used the forced amount of eregy from the run to slash at imense power, the blackness was cut clean in half horizentaly and this reveald that the Kazekage was standing there.

In moments He had brought the sword across again, this time with not as much power but the wooden blade still slidded smoothly threw the chakra.

"Faster!" He shouted.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:33 pm

(you put 97 words)

Sadly seeing how easly the Mizukage swung his stick through the black Chakra, Satune put even more effort, but not just into contorling his Chakra controling, but also trying to harden it. Satune knew tha he would do nothing to the Mizukage if h hit him with a blow like lat time, so Satune hardened his chakra, an molded it into the shape of a blanket. After he did tis, he tried to grasp the Mizukage with his Chakra, this time it w moving a bit faster, and it seemed that it was a darker sde of black than last time.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:38 pm

The Mizukage half-smiled as he noticed the blanket, it looked slightly harder then before. Sandly The Mizukage's stick penetrated it like tissue. And He continuesly hacked at it a few more times before jumping back with his dammeged stick.

"Your getting better!" He shouted across the field, "what if you mastered this technique?!" He prepared for another dash as the blanket reformed.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:48 pm

(you wrote 61 words)

"That would be great," he repied. Satune was angry, since after all the effort he put into that chaka, the Mizukage still cut through it like papaer. He concentratedeven more on the hardness of his Chakra, he didnt care if the Mizukae was able to cut through it, he just cared it the Mizukage whent through it like paper. Satune still kept the blanket formation.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:28 pm

The Mizukage took another swing at the blanket and the sword broke, he had been swinging it rather roupghly, this must have dammeged it badly.

He smiled and threw the shard away, His leg swooped around and came into contact with the blanket of darkness, he kicked threw it like sand, even though it defenitly slwoed his foot down.

"I have an question! Does it protect you from attacks?" He grined maleciously at this as he turne to face Satune.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:46 pm

(you put 78 words)

"probably not now, it will when I can control it better," Satune said, bring his wall of Chakra closer towards him, putting more chakra into it, the wall became some darker than before. Satune realized that he rapidly became better and better at manuiplating his Chakra. At the star of the day he could bearly mae shapes, now he was fighting with it, Satune just stood here and thought of how useful this will ben future battles, but quickly got out of his thopughts and concentrated on what was happening now.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:44 am

The Mizukage's fist stopped inches from Satune's face, awakening him from his dreams. "Your getting better! Keep going!" His fist was poulled back, but quickly launched again just to be stopped by the darkness again. Folowed by the kage jumping back and performin a back flip to land on the ground, his hand reaching for another stick on the ground.

"But I must see the offensive force of this." He seemed more calm, but a tone of happyness was found in his voice.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sat Mar 17, 2007 10:59 pm

(you put 87 words)

Again, seeing his great and dramatic improvement, Satune felt like he just got a big burst of power. this time, Satune put most of his Chakra into the speed of his made blanket, Satune saw that the color of the Chakra got a bit lighter, but the speed whent way up. Seeing that the Mizukage might attack at any time, Satune took half of his Chakra wall and kept it close to him, incase of an attack, and with the other half, Satune made it chase the Mizukage.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:12 pm

The Mizukage noticed the blanket of darkness flying with greater speed at him. He smiled at the dramatic immprovement and took a step back. He brought his leg to the ground and flung himself over the blanket, running towards Satune with both his hands behind his back shaping him like an arrow. He slowed and turned sharply to the right and turned around quickly again and slashed at the defensive wall. this showing the kage were Satune was. He smiled and begged for more.

He spun his legs and shifted his weight to swing himself over the first wall and cut it down the center verticaly as he slid down. This cutting it in half.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 2:49 pm

(you put 114)

Seeing that the Mizukage still easly cut through his wall, but Satune also saw that his wall was becoming stronger. Since the Mizukage was becoming closes and closer, Satune jumped back about 10 feet, just to get some distance from the Mizukage. when he was far enough, Satune wanted to see if his made Chakra could witstand the pressure under the earth. Satune put both of his hands on the ground, and concentrated so that he made his chakra go under the earth, and make the shape of a skipe. When he did this, he made his two underground spikes, and made them attack the Mizukage, withought him knowing. When he did this, Satune felt his spikes going slower, since they had to go through the ground.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 3:01 pm

The two spikes exploded from the ground one after the other, the mizukage's eyes swiftly darted to the ground as he jumped back. The two black spikes protruded from the ground and the kage couldn't see threw the dark blanket that wasn't cut in half.

"Smart move! But make it harder! I wan't it to stop my fis...!" His sentence trailed off as his fist collided with the spike and blew the top off, similar to sand but stiill thiner.

He weight turned him swiftly as his leg cut off the spike at the base. It flew into the air and scatterd off to dissimlate.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 6:23 pm

(you put 103 words)

Satune saw that this was a good time for the Mizukage to attack him, so he made a wall of Chakra in front of him self, and again he put both of his hands on the ground, to make the same spikes. Satune was tired from all this training and improving, but he still had a plan, he was going to bring one of the underground spikes in front of the Mizukage and one behind the Mizukage, and attack him with both at once. Satune realised that the two spikes that he made underground did not go as fast as the last ones 'probably because i made a wall in front of me, and im more tired now that i was back then" he thought.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:34 pm

The spikesd bounded from each side, sadly the Mizukage just pivoted to the side and spun around to wrap his fingers on the spikes heads. He riped off the heads and let them dissipate. He looked at Satune and saw a wall of darkness come up infront of him. The kage smiled and shouted to him.

"Make it harder! Forget about defense I won't attack you!"

He waited to see and anticipated his next move.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 8:48 pm

(you put 73 words)

After the Mizukage said this, Satune's defensive wall dissapated. Satune now put one arm in front of him, and one hand on the ground. He was going to put a giant wall on top of the Mizukage, and at the same time he will have a spik traveling through the ground, but when the spike gets close enough to the Mizuage, Satune was going to also maket in a wall to hopefully trap the Mizukage.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:02 pm

The Mizukage made ONLY one of his eyes move up to look at the wall, the other focused hard on Satune. This strange act of chamealiasim could have maybe frightend Satune.The wall under him began to raise and above him lower. The Mizukage perofrmed a quick one handed handsign and lowered it to his side. He brought the eye that was facing above him to look at Satune.

"Your swiftly getting better! Your body must be slowly opening itself to this power."

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:12 pm

(you put 81 words)

'So he can individualy move one of his eyes what ever ive seen worst, but he shouldnt be able to see the back side of him self' Satune thought, putting both of his hands on the ground. Satune struggled to make 5 weak chakra spikes, but when he did it, he decided to make 3 of them go under the Mizukage, and the two other ones go behind the Mizukage, Satune paid attention to both of the spikes behind the Mizukage, so that if the Mizukage dodges the spikes commig from under him, the spikes behind will be ready, no matter what direction he goes to aviod.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:43 pm

The Mizukage's eye darted around to look in as many valid direction's as possible. He thought for a moment and decide to reveal something to Satune.

"Master dodging technique, moon song ballerina." He closed one of his eyes and raised on foot of the ground to gently place it on his other knee, wich he bent slightly. His arms went above his head to touch by the finger tips over his head. He lost any sign of a smile and lowered his head. This figure may have made a foolish genin laugh beacouse he loked like ballerina.

But any sign of laughter would leave as the spikes from the ground reveal themselves. The mizukage danced to the side and ened up standing on the tip of the middle one. But whiel that happend, within the next second, the other spikes came. He spun around and glided of to the side, barly lowering his head under one of the spikes. He looked like he was dacing.

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PostSubject: Re: Requsting Bloodline Tarn   Mon Mar 19, 2007 8:43 am

(you put 163 words)

Suprised by the move that the Mizukage just did, Satune thought that it looked kinda weird, but Satune also knew that it was a useful move. Now Satune needed to think of a new idea o how to get the Mizukage with his black Chakra. It took a while, but when Satune thought of his plan, it wa kinda good, he was going to make 3 things of Chkra, 2 of them would make half a rectangle, and they would go on either sie of the Mizukage, and the last bit of Chakra would go on top of the Mizukage shaped as a circle, all of these put togeter would make some kind of box to trap him inside. It took alot o effort to make these 3 ones, since Satune had to put extra Chakra into them, and also he was getting really tired from all thisraining. but with alot of effort, Satune made them and they look alot darker them the last ones that Satune made.

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